The art and cartography rule, and this was the first adventure I've read for this jam that has me laughing out loud in a coffee shop, so big plus for that
This adventure is tons of fun!! Light spoilers ahead: the trap in area 4 is possibly one of my favorite traps ever; I love how it's so telegraphed, and so immediately deadly, but also softens the insta-kill a bit by making your character's death both hilarious and rad. I think that's something a table would talk about for years
It shows that you had fun making this, and that joy really shines through in this work