I liked the subversion of the title, I think that's the neat thing about this Jam. Clear writing, and cool cover, but I had a lot of trouble with the keying on the map. The dotted lines pointing to each location was just a lot of information to take in. You made the city feel alive and lived in, which is a feat in and of itself for this little space! I would have loved to see something to point the PCs in the right direction, even if the GM is picking the location!