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Such a fun and out-there adventure, and a very fun read.


What I thought worked well

  • The theme, tone and execution work super well. It's a cat and a car and interdimensions(?), but it all works.
  • I love the "bonus notes", makes it feel appropriately meta
  • A solid balance of random events for the travel and a final confrontation.
  • Cool way to pick sides

What I thought could be improved

  • I missed any car usage near the end, felt like it became a regular dungeon crawl, but maybe I missed something
  • A bit more on the car (stats? abilities?) could have been neat
  • Again maybe I missed it but it has everything except items which felt absent, even if just 1. Not a big deal though
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Thanks so much for reading and for such considered feedback! 

I've been kicking myself since submitting the adventure that I didn't include a sick-ass jump at the end to get onto the roof of the sanctum or something.