Super interesting adventure with a great twist and cool concept! Left me thinking
What I thought worked well
- I like the abrupt twist, I think it'll work well at the table and it felt fresh.
- The journaling experience is neat, I liked the vibe and felt like an easy game to pick up.
- Really interesting ending
What I think could be improved
- Maybe I missed it but I would have liked a better connection between the two parts in both parts. Maybe a hint, or a resurfacing of some elements
- The the latter half felt a bit toothless or bare, could have been fun with some element of threat or character or something beyond keys to the end