I found a bug with a repeating word, I do not know if it is a mistake or not, just because I am not a native English speaker, but it seems strange to me.
25 days ago(+1)
Wow, good catch! I can't believe no one (including myself) has noticed that until now. And on both the original intro and the loop! I've fixed it now: between this and the recent gallery fix, I may as well push an official new version number, so I'll try to get that up soon.
25 days ago(+1)
If I were you, I would check the entire text in the game for grammatical errors, you never know what to find there. XD
If only I had the time. I do my best when initially writing the games to try to check for typos and other mistakes, but part of the problem is that RPGMaker's dialog text input doesn't let you see the whole chunk of text at a glance, you have to scroll (sometimes quite a bit), so it's easy for things like this to slip in. Normally players find the small things I miss pretty quickly on release though: that's why I was surprised this one had survived for so long.
25 days ago (+1)
I had my doubts about this, but I'm going to ask anyway, "justice is DIY (Do It Yourself)"? Maybe it should say "justice is DIE/DYING" here? I just thought for the first time that it was written correctly here and that most likely these are features of the English language, but I'm more than sure that this is not the case. 