I'm not familiar with Land of Eem but I find this submission very clearly written and on theme. I like the comic vibes given by the cover, but for my taste in the other pages I feel like you could have played more with elements and colours, as they feel just a little empty (visually speaking) to me. It is a very comic theme and you can totally take inspo from the pop-comic movement and try to make it even more cartoonish, if you ever feel like doing and expanded version of it