I really like the setting you've built and the central tension of the module, there is some good space for the players to explore and some fun ways the GM could develop the growing strife further.
I think the module could use a few more passes at editing as there are some minor typos, plus I think the font choice for the main body of text on page 2 should be different. It works on page 1 due to the lower quantity, but on page 2 it should probably just be used for headers so it is easier to read.
The hex keys are pretty solid, but you may have been able to trim them down a bit to earn back some space to breathe. I think an expanded version after the Jam would be good, just to give each hex a bit more room to improve readability. Great work"