Love the concept, the workers must unionise! (not sure how many parties are willing to be scabs/strikebreakers though XD)
This one is really well put together at a glance, the cover is well done,, the layout is appealing and the text is clear and readable, the map and illustrations are s great and the timeline is fun! It is probably slightly linear for my taste, but the the groundwork laid by the premise more than compensate for that in my opinion.
I do think it is a bit unclear where the denizens are located. the weavers are mentioned as being in the atelier, but it would be a lot easier to understand if their presence was mentioned in the key as well, same goes for the wranglers and moth + larva. I could figure it out quickly, but it's best to make it explicit. The timeline is cool, but I don't think this adventure is complex enough to need one. (still well-presented though!)
The size of document is a bit weird. I don't think it needs to be an A6 and might actually be unreadable at that scale, but given that this is digital, it doesn't affect too much, just something to resolve later, I think.