Cleary s8me of the best writing I’ve read in this jam. Colorful, descriptive and with a dash of eloquence, yet parsable.
The dungeon let me think of Iron Maiden’s Revelations, don’t ask why.
It’s a bit unfortunate the title given isn’t much more than veneer to delve into this spectacular tomb.
I like it a lot and enjoyed reading it!
(Pst, second to last sentence: you mean water, not war, right?)