This is great. I love the reversal of where / what the Prison is, it's really beautiful. The Callings are very ominous. I also enjoyed "adhere to your programming", and the wearing of the amphibian skins. Managing to fit a whole game including character creation in without the pages feeling at all crowded is really impressive. I suspect players might want to know more about the wider environment in which they find themselves at the start of the second section, but not a big issue as it is reasonable with this type of game to assume that the GM will be able to come up with something to fill in those kind of gaps.