Thank you so much for the detailed , actionable feedback.
It’s interesting that you found the white easy to read, when most did not. Maybe I need to choose a better font and not use the black type unless I use a background behind it to make it pop. Great to hear because I like it too. The idea was to use the blue from old school maps.
100%. Yeah the cover is unfinished. I assume it’s a cigarette. LOL. It’s a public domain photo from a museum. I need to add my sources to those. I will be collaging in more Dnd details to him. Tall boots. Leather armour details. Perhaps a helmet. Also his legs need work.
Glad you like the map. I have revised it to pop more.
OMG. The typos are not my usual, but I was making changes at the last minute. I’ve edited but didn’t want to upload in case it’s not allowed.
Very flattered it’d be fun to run. Hard to know how twist and turns will be perceived by a reader/ player.
Great points and very much appreciated!
I am a big fan of your entry as well.