Although beautiful and mythical, this module is a bit messy. One falls in love with the story, but the timeline at the beginning names a lot of places and persons we do not know and the adventure itself does not make it clear where the story currently is. Perhaps both should have been combined into some kind of “storydiagram”, showing the checks.
The module is very check heavy and does not take into account players decisions. There might be a bit of tweaking necessary to not set them on a three-check-railroad.
Overall it looks and reads beautiful, but needs work in structure.