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Perhaps it’s the style of the system and I’m missing some of the vocabulary, but I find the texts hard to follow, often a bit bumpy and combined with the wine and dance terms used some parts are hard to read. Also there a contradictions (“the Estate needs more visitors”, “the Estate is becoming overcrowded”).

This is clearly a work of love and it looks gorgeous. Yet the writing might need another editorial pass.

Yeah wholly agree!  
Wish I started sooner in the period, but it is what it is. This was great learning experience for me. Better to put 75% finished work under the microscope than no work. I appreciate you giving it a look through, hopefully next time it’ll be better!

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For me, this jam is a huge learning experience :)