Fantastic cover / map, I especially appreciate how all the routes between areas are represented clearly as well as being described in the text. I was initially a bit "ah this seems more normal than I'd expect" (based on last year) but then got to region 8, and was disabused of that notion. Both big fights are great with really fun mechanics. My only criticism is that the introductory paragraph is a little clunky / confusing - the last sentence needs breaking up a bit at least - and there are some minor grammatical errors (mostly involving punctuation) throughout which jar a little given the overall quality of the writing. Really love everything else though!