This is probably the densest work I’ve read thus far and I love it. One on hand, it could really benefit from more room to breathe. For some reason though, I kinda like it feeling a little cramped?
But I do have concerns from a visual design standpoint for information flow. At times I really struggled to figure out whether I should read down the column or across a row, particularly because it changes from page to page. Sometimes things also weren’t where you might expect them to be (e.g. the sword hiding in the bestiary instead of by 12H.)
The maps are on point, and the orange+black is a really perfect color palette for this. Any reason you switch from black to blue for the Shrine map?