Could you please give me a full critique of my game page, or even the game itself? You can be harsh, blunt, whatever. It would be really useful for me.

https://nooxax.itch.io/voidfall

my first impression after watching the trailer  its some crasy game that is not my genre i play ;)

Hi! I looked through the game page rather than testing the build. 

My main suggestion would be to make the descriptions more direct, especially near the beginning. I’d explain the core gameplay loop—what the player actually does—in one or two short sentences before introducing all the systems and features. The game seems to have a lot of interesting ideas, but a clearer opening would make them easier to understand immediately.

Hi, I think there might be a slight inconsistency in the art style across different parts of the game—for instance, between the meteorite in the top bar and the battle screens. I really like some of the other art pieces; they have a great psychedelic feel to them. However, the UI seems a bit unpolished and overly complex, which would probably keep me from playing it personally.