Some notes as I read:
- Fantastic worldbuilding for Mars! Sadly corporate, but well
- This all reminds me of For All Mankind, Ed's daughter looking for life on Mars (no spoilers, I haven't finished it yet
- Minor errata in_tact in page 5
- You didn't sign. Sign with your name or tag on your artwork
My pal, you have made a really complete survival/exploring game with a powerful plot!
The story is thrilling and oh my... so much drama! I found myself skipping through to see if I finally found the fate of Nan-Young.
My only complain is that I had to read a lot until I understood this twofold nature of the adventure, a small summary of what this is about would have helped me
Great work. Cheers!