Ahhhh I LOVE this game! Hope you'll develope it further :D
Some things that weren't immediately clear to me at the first playthrough: The one falling from waiting for the elevator. I thought he has brain cancer. Maybe A little blood on the outside of the head would help :) Also was unsure of the armor arrow. Because there was an arrow, so I wasn't sure if it was a metaphor red (stamp) or if it actually happend in their world (green stamp).
Maybe you want people to play the game several times and fail sometimes. Then it is good like it is ^^
One thing I would definetly improve though is the Button to flip the bodies, because it felt often a bit fiddly to find and press it.
Still one of my favorite entries so far! :D