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(Submission 5/29 - "The Dance of the Timesteels" by ChrisHQ)

As soon as I heard that first chord, I knew I was in for a treat! I genuinely love this piece and the composition! It is incredibly reminiscent of a festival jig and I'm all here for it! Definitely one of the best in the jam!

If I could give any criticism, it would be for the beginning with the intro guitar and the buildup. A small amount of wind ambience in the background would've really gone a long way and bring out the contrast of the guitar and the windy silence. But, I know you can't really do that in Musescore (I believe that is what you are using) so I don't really have any say whatsoever.

You are incredibly talented, Chris! Thank you for blessing my ears!

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Thanks a lot, I'm glad to hear people's feedback on my music ! I think for the ambiance and the effects, I could make it work on audacity, and I was asking myself the same question I think on the 2nd day, that I managed to have that guitar and piano like I wanted, but it lacked of some environment to carry the listener from the very beginning, it takes a little time to make it engaging, but I didn't know what to add ; wind ambiance could be great, thanks for the suggestion !

Of course!