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Hey, I've just listened to your track!

I found your track really interesting. It stands out from the other submissions thanks to its cute, cheerful style and its "happy goodbye" feeling, which is very well executed.

I also really liked the melody, the energy, and the instrumentation. The only point I would mention is the ending. It felt like it was building toward a final climax, but the piece ended before that payoff arrived.

Overall, I really enjoyed your submission.

Good luck with the rest of the voting period!

Thanks, The ending was definitely a part that even I felt I faltered on, I had struggled finding a way to include that rhythmic piano section and then being able to transition to an ending from there so I ended up rushing something that didn't sound too great. Glad to hear all the other stuff went well though, again appreciate the feedback!