There's certainly something here, but it lacks some motivation. I think the timeframe you get to do things is a *little* too short, but in general the problem is not knowing, if it wasn't for the page I'd have no idea what to do or why I'm doing anything at all, I think something like just adding a note inside the game that gives a hint on what you're supposed to be doing would've improved the experience greatly. The graphics look great, as someone who's mainly doing 3D for a living I know it's hard to get the aesthetic right so kudos for that, but hearing that screaming 5 times in a minute is a little too much for me. Overall I think the theme and its relation to the title is pretty solid, the game looks nice, even though it's lacking some crucial elements, but if you polished those departments I think it could certaintly sell well as an indie title!
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