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New Dev & First game demo - Need feed back

A topic by Liminary-Dev created 31 days ago Views: 114 Replies: 2
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Hello, I'm Liminary and I'm a solo new developer and just released my first game demo titled "Between Places" It's a exploration based backrooms game that ties in light puzzles, sanity/sanity management, alt routes, lost notes and null doors into one package. 

I've had a pretty poor ctr when compared to my impressions, so I went out of my way to really redo my game thumbnail, my page layout, theme as well as restructure my description and add gameplay looping gifs. 

I really hope this does help my ctr, cause at the moment my ctr is 1.89% with almost 4k impressions, so i'm getting the impressions but no one is clicking, so I need some people to give me feedback on my page and let me know your thoughts. 


Cheers!

https://liminary-dev.itch.io/between-places-demo

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Hello!

We played your game and made a video on YouTube:

On top of that, here’s some feedback:

  • Spooky vibes, had a great time!
  • The text on the papers was sometimes hard to read. Maybe displaying it on the UI could improve this?
  • LOVED the almond water and other items 😁
  • The visuals when losing look amazing!
  • It’s very satisfying to get lost in the map and suddenly end up in a place we’ve been before. Part of the spooky unsettling vibes!
  • I think there was an issue in the beginning when messing with the settings, and the game crashed? Not sure.

This doesn’t directly address the CTR that you mentioned. Not sure what the game’s page looked like before, but it looks really nice now! Maybe one idea would be to add an animated gif on the game’s thumbnail too, which might be more eye catching?

We also put the game’s link in the video description, so hopefully that will help with more traffic. Thanks for making this game!

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Hey there, thank you so much for playing my game! There is a few bugs with some stuff I'm trying to iron out but thank you for your feedback!!