Adding on to feedback about the left and right paths being confusing as written; I think part of the confusion is that the visual map appears to only have one path. Reading your reply to Michael, I think I understand how the map and the locations text work together for Act 2; as written, it's a little harder to connect the map and descriptions.
Just to give specific possible advice to address this for the 1.0, emphasizing the possible path including and the path excluding the cliffside, and somehow making clear that sequentially running ALL the entries in the center is not the intended pathing.