(Submission 16/29 - "FREQ//DRIFT: The Ghost Chord, end credits theme" by clutch taco)
Really good work :D
I really enjoyed the creativity of the track, especially with your own personal limitations (no F natural). The vibe is immaculate and really energetic!
I have some advice that you could improve on.
When I first started off the song, I felt as though the song was directly attacking me with the main lead, so I would just take it out of the intro and replace it with something more delicate and softer to buildup to the energetic choruses. Because the melody gets repeated so many times, I just wish there was something complimenting it like a harmony in later sections to reintroduce something new, although adding back the F natural helped a little, but not enough to fully satiate my brain. Another thing I want to point out is the lack of the pad in the choruses. I don't know if this was intentional to make it seem empty, but it was incredibly quiet and lessened the impact of the high-octane sections.
Nevertheless, you created something really cool :D
Thanks clutchtaco!