(Submission 17/29 - "After the Trials and Tribulations" by DSound)
The quality of the instruments is incredibly lush and gorgeous! I just wish that I could decipher what was happening... If you didn't tell me that the song was in 3/4, I probably would've never EVER guessed that. I don't want to repeat anything that anyone else had said, but I completely agree with them.
You could definitely let the melodic ideas breathe a lot more and focus on the motif that I don't think I even heard clearly.
You have a great sense of orchestral music, however, and improving on pacing would definitely help your music out a ton!
Thanks for the vibe, DSound!