Overall - a module I really liked! Very evocative writing and sets a great tone for what I feel would be a really fun adventure to run. Another module that is slowly influencing more about how I want to play FatherFog.
Areas I feel could be improved (acknowledging that I see that some have already been discussed)
* The left and right paths confused me. Without reading below I'm not sure what they are or how to play.
* Visual - I really liked the Red Text for Characters in Act 3. I'm not really sure why those instances are red versus others throught the middle panels that aren't?
* Something I think i'm guilty of myself but I found the outer panels, especially the italisized text, a little draining to try and read. I suspect this is better when printed!
Overall - wonderful work and continued progress and excellence