Pretty good job, I like it overall. Unstable dreams is a good theme, maybe you can elaborate it more in your next project :)

This is such a nice and cohesive first game :00, Everything flows really well visually and you have a knack for fun rpg dialogue, I hope I see more games by u in the future!

Congrats on your first game! It was really good! The platforming was a good challenge and escalated well. The use of colors and lighting was really good and made a cool vibe. If you added a bit of feedback to when you are killed on the spikes it can help make it more impactful. Nice job!

Great Arts, I really loved what you have done with dialogue, its text effects are awesome. 

Really impressive for a first game, I love your art style and cute characters, the game could be more long.

Overall its a good game, congrats! 

It's nice! I liked the artstyle, it's really short though but I get it. Also the music doesn't loop so it's unfortunate:(

Hey I really love the art style for this game, but it was too short! As soon as I got my grove the game ended. The text interactions were cute but couldnt go away so it became part of the obstacle too. But for a short time nice work!