(Submission 19/29 - "Together, Our Time Becomes One" by Noz)
I got so lost into your music while listening to it that I genuinely forgot to write anything down about it as it played. Absolutely mesmerizing! I love your usage of dissonance throughout the composition.
I have some feedback:
Similar to what doost said, I think that mixing will definitely help. especially by increasing the master volume using a compressor / limiter / soft clipper (if you need). I had to turn up my volume up around 66% higher than what is humanly reasonable (yes i did the maths). Because of this, the instantaneous shift at 4:00 actually scared my boots off. I get what you were trying to go for: a sudden discombobulation, and I think that's fine. Just not when I have to lower my already increased volume down 16% and when I've already gotten used to the more peaceful sections for four minutes.
Despite this, I think your composition skills are fantastic! I loved it!