(Submission 22/29 - "One Time" by Aestus)
That was an interesting track! I liked the musical ideas and enjoyed listening to the instrumentation. Sorta reminds me of Waterflame a little bit with your spiccato strings and your drum choice, especially in the middle section.
I do agree with Chwrlue that the instruments feel quite static and dry, so perhaps changing up note velocity and applying some panning to some instruments to enhance the width of the track.
Thanks Aestus for your submission! I thought it was pretty neat!