I can see author enthusiasm and raw imaginative power, and thats what i want so see, really. A powerful pitch and a heartfell make up give this piece of work charme and some enthralling power. Yet ther is A LOT of finish work to be done to make this all work. That's not an adventure, but a location of an adventure. I wouldn't even say it's a finish problem, its a middle work problem. Probably i will use this location, but none of the other element. in the end, it's raw. Godd, but raw.