Thank you for the detailed feedback! I'll look into it once the jam is ended to post an improved version on soundcloud 😁
I can hear the dryness where compared to the other submissions which means I have to learn how to use references when I mix. Here with the time constraint I focused on volume balances and not on CC reverb and so on 😅
For the dissonances you're not the first to tell me there a some in my 2 or 3 tracks I did so far. I grow accustomed to them very fast so I'll have to check with music theory