Nice entry :) Somehow I could not get to go longer than clicking "Next" once (after second button push, so after the outside/park'y scene, the screen remained black, I don't know if it has anything to do with my phone having no charge left... I was plying on Windows PC btw). There was an error in browser's console too, below the print with chapter number and other debug stuff:
ERROR: Can't change to a null scene. Use unload_current_scene() if you wish to unload it. index.js:467:18
at: change_scene_to_packed (scene\main\scene_tree.cpp:1688)
I generally liked it, the Chloe's visuals were a bit strange to look at (due to different visual style than the background), but who am I to judge when I was barely able to make 2 sprites for my game as well :P It was surprising at first, but other than that it made her nicely distinguish from the background. The story (at least to the point I played) was engaging, it was a nice visual novel with nice audio. I had fun :)