I really loved shifts 1 and 2, I really believe the story was going pretty smoothly, the characters are very well written and, overall, I'm really looking forward to the final product. But in shift 3, idk if I'm the only one who felt this, but the dialogues between the characters felt really long for me. For example, in the part where MC has this memory with Lane and Amelia, the conversation goes on and on when they're really just talking poo of each other. Also, on BB's route at the garage, I felt kinda stuck, going in circles talking and talking with background characters that will only give me some stories or some fun facts about BB. Please don't missinterpret my comment, I LOVE your work and your writting is beautiful, it's just that the conversations between the characters felt forcibly long (for me). CONTINUE YOUR HARD WORK, YOU'RE DOING AMAZING!!!!!!