Well done on your first game submission! I loved the art style, music and story! Getting localization in Chinese and English in one week is not easy too! I got "the white coat fits" achievement :D
Some feedback:
- The text size can we small at times and difficult to read
- While this is a visual novel style and you want to share a story, sometimes there can be alot of clicking through the story and not many choices that have equal risk/reward outcomes for the player. You want to make the player feel like they had "just" barely survived the night shift (if that is your intention of course). That way it can feel rewarding at the end.
I assume you created the art this week? Very impressive!
Great job again!
Here's my game: https://localhugdealer.itch.io/trust-no-1