General thoughts
I really like the art direction. It immediately gave me a sort of Diablo meets Loop Hero feeling, and the overall presentation made me want to understand what was going on.
What I liked
- The visual style is easily the standout for me. It has a strong identity and feels polished for a prototype.
- The grid, abilities, enemies, and surrounding UI make the game look like there could be a good amount of tactical depth here.
- The core presentation was interesting enough that I wanted to experiment and figure it out.
What I would change
- Even for a prototype, I think some kind of short tutorial or additional guidance would help a lot. I could see the available actions, but I was not immediately confident about how all of the systems fit together or what I should be prioritizing.
- I would keep the guidance lightweight rather than overexplaining. Just enough to get a new player into the loop and then let them learn naturally.
- I would also recommend linking directly to the game/prototype you want feedback on instead of your profile page. Removing that extra step makes it much easier for people to jump straight in and test the right thing.
Overall, I think the presentation is already doing a lot of work for you. The main thing I would focus on is making the first few minutes easier to understand so players can get into the actual strategy without having to first figure out how the game works.
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