This looks great! Great writing, well laid out, very strong art. My two relatively minor complaints are that a) the mottled background makes it hard to read the delicate font in some places, so maybe either increase the weight of the font or make the mottled grey parts lighter, and b) it would be really nice to have a brief paragraph up front that gives the GM a high level overview so we know how to contextualize the information we're reading more easily. Great job!