Hey, I've just listened to your track!
From beginning to end, it was awesome. I really felt like I was travelling, embarking on a short adventure. I can definitely imagine this music playing over flashbacks to different areas of the game or memorable cutscenes during the end credits.
The instrumentation is excellent and creates wonderful atmospheres throughout the piece. The melodies are great as well, especially the one that appears around 1:05.
I honestly can't find anything to criticize, so congratulations on such a well-crafted composition.
Good luck with the rest of the voting period!