I love an adventure with a really clean layout that's easy to pick up and feel like you're ready to run it after one read through. I'm also partial to Coleridge and stories about getting turned into a beast so this is hitting a lot of marks for me. Some actual critiques:
- Love the distressed look of the headers but that texture can make some of the finer lines and also the blackletter font a bit harder to read, if that's a concern.
- How does becoming a fish and being "effectively killed" interact with the pretty robust death rules for FF? It's one of the most interesting things about the game so I think it would be really cool if you expanded on how this interacts with the base rules (meeting Death, etc).
- You didn't really use the theme so I feel like I have to take marks off but I personally don't care, this is great.
Really good, definitely going towards the top of my "to-run" pile!