my only critique is that i see some of your other games have content warnings but this one doesn't at all. please consider putting them up here!
okay now time for the rest of the comment:
- excellently unique UI
- great polish right off the bat with your splash page and developer stinger
- included baseball glossary was a helpful little touch
- visceral, personal, atmospheric writing. prose is a tool and you REALLY know how to use it, like with run-on sentences in tense scenes to give the reader a feeling of urgency.
- i love how robin serves as a relatably rotten protagonist that helps us explore desire, resentment, and the sick satisfaction of righteous power in a patriarchal world.