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Cheesy Moon's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Use of Colors | #60 | 3.383 | 3.383 |
| Overall | #67 | 3.319 | 3.319 |
| Theme | #80 | 3.298 | 3.298 |
Ranked from 47 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
How does your art incorporate the theme?
There is a wizard who has left his tower and is magically floating while using his crazy wand to launch a ship into the sky with pink flames. As the ship ascends you can see the Cheese Moon behind it. A Fantastical scenario !!!
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Comments
I like it! Interesting idea there, I liked the use of the colors specially the colors of the sky, really well done!
I appreciate it :D
I love the boldness of the style here, the rocket in front of the moon is delightful both theme-wise and visually satisfying to look at in how you used shapes & colors; the wavy border is also a really nice touch. The only thing I'm not sure about is the city below; more colors there or maybe more variation in shapes could've made the piece more visually cohesive instead of top-heavy.
Altogether this a really fun image, it made me smile!
Thank you for the feedback! I do see your point and I probably should have thought about that in the moment, but I'm glad I made you smile :)
Really love the whimsy in the concept! I think the simple blending in the sky lends toward the sort of energy that this piece has. I would have loved to see what would've happened if you had more time to work on the buildings.
thank you so much for the kind comment <3
Hey, for two hours, this is still really good!
I think the sky could be blended a little better, and the tail end of the purple fire could use some work. But the fire itself looks great and the concept is really fun!
Thanks for the feedback. I really appreciate the thought put into it :D