Nice to see a game being finished. Brothel sims are rather rare.
I played about till the raids, content wise. Not sure if I will continue. A few words of feedback.
You need a better cover image. Use part of the screenshot with the reception lady, if you have no other images. But that thumbnail is boring. The only appealing thing is, that you have Brothel right in the title.
You have unused slots for tags. Consider tycoon, brothel, simulation. And reconsider visual novel. This is not a branching story to read. It is a tycoon simulator. With a bunchload of side quests and mini games. (there is a minigames tag too. Change Ren'Py into meta information, you do need to use a tag for this.)
The user interface of the game is confusing and looks like a webpage from the 2000s.
The game and description hide all the gimmicks and mini games. Why is there no screenshot of any of the mini games?
The game play loop is odd. Like, how you can train up to over 1000 energy. At first I thought this is going the incremental clicker game way of inflated numbers. With how there are all these tiny percentages that imply they will multiply your general income. What gives what is not communicated to the player and that is bad for optimisation and management games. You basically just spam training until you can buy out other brothels. With those then you cannot do much, and it rather seems that the percentages of your own girls do not raise the profits of the other companies. So it is a dead end to train the girls.
Trading on the stock market yields unholy amounts of money, but is risky. And since you included the vacation button, I assume the intended way is waiting a lot to bolster your money reserves and then snatch the next rival.
Apart from the qualitiy of life features, where when to click and where buttons are placed and such, the biggest issue I have with the game is all the different directions the game takes you. Like a pizza with candy toppings. Both are good. But mixing too many things together either works or people complain about pineapple on their pizza. And you hide this in the description.
People that would be entertained by a genre mash, will not see this in your tags or screenshots. There is even a deck builder mini game in this. And some pseudo dating sim. Oh, and you get married just like that. And there are hints about more harem and even pregnancy content. And then I spied talk about a witch in your devlogs.
This game goes all the places you would not expect.