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I played your game and here's my comments, I tried commenting on the game itself but itch won't let me because it says I'm posting too much so I'm trying here:

This was a really interesting read, I appreciated the artwork accompanying things. I also liked that it was easy to tell what was going on with all the clues and conversations you could gather. I found a couple of typos, don't know if you want to fix them but they are in these two sentences:

"Elaborate potions for important matters? The picture of some powerful or dangerous concoctions flashses in your mind. Judging from the state of the bottles that were all knocked over, what if there was an important matter that the grand wizard had to immediately attend to?"

"You approach Magnus, the mayor of Crann. He must be desperate to travel this far to help with the investigation, you think to youself. Wizard Alasdair must help him and his townspeople a lot judging from the crowd waiting for the grand wizard in front of the tower."

Good job on writing this, it was an interesting world and made me want to travel there.

And of course here's mine if you got time to try it.

/jam/brackeys-16/rate/4951824 

Do note that it does require multiplayer, at least one other player should give you a good idea but 3 or more for best experience.