Hi! very nice advices, sooo thank you! If you want you could give a rating to our game and maybe a feedback based on the page ;3 we want to know your opinion.
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Hey there! Awesome work on Trust Noir.
Your page already looks good to begin with. But two suggestions:
1. I would reduce the contrast a bit between the text vs. the background, as it could be a bit hard to read. A black overlay with 30-50% opacity on top of the background would do wonders.
2. I would also add a screenshot or two with some dialog that hint at the premise of the story. GIFs would be even better coz the game's atmosphere is already amazing.
Keep it up!