Your game looks incredible
https://unofficial-translator.itch.io/executor
The narrative concept and art style are fantastic—turning bullet-hell mechanics into collecting words to piecemeal a story is super creative! The music and overall page presentation look super clean.
A few tweaks would really take it to the next level:
- Ending clarity: Adding better feedback when pressing submit on the final form so players know their choices registered.
- Quality of life: A notebook or journal UI to review collected phrases, plus character name tags during dialogue swaps.
- Difficulty/Readability: Slightly larger text options and making the dodging mechanics a bit more challenging.
Awesome job pulling off such a unique concept under jam pressure! Mind giving our project a try when you have a moment? We'd love your feedback: /jam/brackeys-16/rate/4953523