What a vibe! First of all I have to say that I really dig your drawings. Having something like this drawn with biro or fine liner feels like quite a commitment, but in a way also creates a rawness that works very well with your envisioned project. Then also the music was quite refreshing from the usual „ambient“ stuff but has hit the right spot for me. Feeling like a mix of experimental outboard gear and in the box sound design that felt raw but yet well crafted. Only thing for me would be the upper mid spectrum that felt a bit shouty at times. But all in all it was a splendid vibe. Somewhere between Mass Effect, old school Sy-Fi and Metroid Prime.
On a personal note, since the first few caught a similar tone, if that style of music suits your genera taste of music I’d highly recommend looking into the artist Hainbach, like in his last album Gentle Hum.
Vibe/Atmosphere: 5/5
Storytelling/History: 3/5 (mostly due to wanting to know more about the live in general and the background of your setting)
Cohesion: 4/5
Uniqness/Originality: 5/5
Execution: 5/5
Incorporation of the Theme: 4/5