Hey, cool game! I like the story flow very much. Also the wilderness system feels great somehow.
The start of the game felt a bit aimless, i was wondering if something will happen besides bars moving. It is a bit of repetition work, but it gets better in the paragon cities.
The only thing that annoys me till now is the visibility of some boxes and the continues scrolling. Also i sometimes don't know which box is relevant for my progress and which is just flair.
I bit my way through, but this is maybe a point, where you could lose some people, if you plan to sell this later or something.
One idea: can you make the chronicle and life tab collapseable and your middle content dynamically expanded if you collapse? I think this would greatly improve the visibility for the stuff you want to focus as player and also reduces the scrolling.
Best Regards!