The art is jaw-dropping. The writing has a decent, stable pace, and above all, Jeff is well written.
Now, a bit of an off-topic rant... I understand that the MC is essentially a blank slate for the player; however, I have yet to play a visual novel where I get to be my authentic self. By that, I mean I get to kick ass. Among web surfing and reading fanfiction, my 15-year-old self picked fights. So this is just personal commentary based on real-world experience- either way, amazing game. Would appreciate it if we got to be more rude and offensive. Even if it ends in death. Back on track, kudos to the creator! Looking forward to more.