Hello!
Cool game. Strongest thing (imo) is the visual presentation. The graphics are good, I like the CRT shader (or whatever it is) on top. The core of the movement in the game is solid, and the character feels good to control. The sound design and music are fitting.
Things I think the game could improve on:
- Core mechanics need more meat on the bones - the core idea of the game is good, there's just not much depth. Each level (ignoring the last) has a very similar feel to it - another mechanic, or a stronger focus on wordplay/more punishment for dying (think one level with no checkpoints rather than 10 distinct levels) would make the experience feel more like a game.
- Grammar and spell checks should be performed
All in all, I like your entry; you did a good job!
Cheers!