Nicely done! I liked the overall narrative. I think that there were a few statements which I wasn't really sure why I had to check if they were lying or not, but overall, it was a nice premise. I also liked the music choice. :)
I agree, the game certainly could use tightening on the phrasing and mystery part. It is difficult to make character sound natural, and give the player the correct hint/intuition at the same time.
