The art is great, love the waterfall-esque vibe! The music was nice, and I very much enjoyed playing this one. I also like how the game supports not listening to the narrator, which is nice for the immersion!
Also, though it's not particularly a bad thing, I would encourage not to use mixels! Even though it's a very very light case, I think getting rid of them would improve the readability of the game!
Overall a nice game, keep it up :D